You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Mona,
I hope you and your family are all well. How have you been? It is been too long since we were last in touch. Here I have some new news for you. Already I know your interest in knowing them.
In my country, I have two major stories to tell. Firstly, they allow the woman here to drive a car and give her the license card. Previously was permitted for ladies to drive. Since the 20th of October, this was change. Furthermore, they made a specific place in Prince Norah University to learn them how to drive and use the car. Secondly, finally, cinema theatre opened in KSA in different areas like Riyadh, Jedda, and Almadena as well. In other words, tourism will work efficiently and a lot of people who want to enjoy will demand to come here. Thus why KSA considered to be one of the most wealthy countries around the world.
A lot of population here are interesting about this news as mine and my family. Because now we can try something new we never had before.
I remember that you love Cinema so much so this new relates to me.
Best regards,
Doaa.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-12-01 | aditithakker | 78 | view |
| 2019-10-21 | mansoureh | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-16 | Tolik | 89 | view |
| 2019-09-17 | manas | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-21 | DoaaOkaila | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mona, I hope you and your family are all well....
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...want to enjoy will demand to come here. Thus why KSA considered to be one of the mos...
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Line 5, column 633, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ost wealthy countries around the world. A lot of population here are interesting...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... about this news as mine and my family. Because now we can try something new we never h...
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Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his new relates to me. Best regards, Doaa.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42713567839 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24733820931 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683417085427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0986891541 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.8235294118 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7058823529 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170217247819 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499776737506 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578239894229 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918363722882 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766636880882 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.23 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.