You have a full time job ,also you are doing a part-time course in the evening , now you find out that you cannot continue in the course .
Write a letter to your course tutor . In your letter •describe the situation
•Explain that you cannot continue at this time
•Say what actions you would like to take
Dear Mr Jack,
I am writing in connection with that evening course, a part-time one, which I attend with you. The issue is that, as you know, my job is everyday day from 9 a.m. to 9 p.m.; therefore, it is difficult for me to attend regularly all sessions of the course. Moreover, my manager extends work days even through weekends until finishing all late projects; so, i don’t have free time nowadays.
I would appreciate it if I can postpone the other parts of course to the beginning of December 2020; furthermore, this duration will be a good opportunity which allows me to end all my delayed work; also, refresh my minds with tips of reading about subjects which I already had studied before with you. Furthermore, it will be a kind of you for suggesting new citations and sharing with me important videos which will improve my knowledge.
Please let me know if these suggestions will be suitable with your arrangements.
Yours sincerely,
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... until finishing all late projects; so, i don’t have free time nowadays. I would...
^
Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur arrangements. Yours sincerely, Adam
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, kind of, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76506024096 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74688886949 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698795180723 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1210818393 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 4.34317383033 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193693946478 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910809001982 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442455858671 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112483289893 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630616959535 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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