You have a full time job and also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor.
Describe your situation
Explain why you cannot continue at this time
Say what action you would like to take.
Dear Mr. James
This is in regard to the discontinuation of the course that i enrolled last year. I have been pursuing the SAP and Tally course for the last couple of months in your institution in the evening batch.
As i mentioned earlier, I got a full time job in A and B builders as account assistant, as a fresher it is a very demanding job for me. I somehow managed one month of my job without affecting my studies, but unfortunately i cannot continue like this, because i am afraid that it will affect my career.
As a part of my training program i have to shift to the company headquarters next week which is in another city and i will be there for almost four month's; due to which i would not be able to continue my studies at least for the next couple of months.
I am aware that this course is available twice a year, so i was looking forward to continue my study after my training program. I am really sorry for any inconvenience caused due to my change of schedule.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon
Yours sincerely
John jaffer janardhanan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the discontinuation of the course that i enrolled last year. I have been pursuin...
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Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nstitution in the evening batch. As i mentioned earlier, I got a full time jo...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ch. As i mentioned earlier, I got a full time job in A and B builders as account assi...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...affecting my studies, but unfortunately i cannot continue like this, because i am...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ly i cannot continue like this, because i am afraid that it will affect my career...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... next week which is in another city and i will be there for almost four months; d...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re for almost four months; due to which i would not be able to continue my studie...
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Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...is course is available twice a year, so i was looking forward to continue my stud...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to continuing'.
Suggestion: to continuing
... twice a year, so i was looking forward to continue my study after my training program. I ...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you soon Yours sincerely John jaffer janardhanan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, at least, i am afraid, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43216080402 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67869835237 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592964824121 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.372314967 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169450234294 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676567535793 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360041951097 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761476176391 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492558826544 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.