You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr Hendrew,
I am Amber Troy, student of your intensive English learning class. I worked as a full-time project manager. I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to continue the course, as my son has met with an accident at school.
He injured his leg while playing Soccer on the field and the doctor has advised him complete bed rest until his caste is removed. Due to this, I will have to attend and take care of him since he is in tremendous pain and unable to walk. Also, the medicines prescribed has to be given on time. For this reason, I will be unable to attend the remaining classes.
I have always passed all the tests in your class with distinction. As the institution has no refund policy, I hope you will consider my situation and defer me to the next available session, so that I can complete the course as well as received my certification.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Amber Troy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Hendrew, I am Amber Troy, student of your intensi...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... worked as a full-time project manager. I am writing to inform you that I will be...
^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours sincerely, Amber Troy
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52882053149 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649425287356 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8622034875 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1818181818 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222782084269 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768407973706 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492652888372 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129716409914 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049239961278 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.