you have had bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. you know that this information is incorrect.
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in reference to clarify in a recent letter I have received from the bank for an overdrawn transaction.
The letter from the bank mentioned that an amount of $240 was overdrawn from my account vide transaction T567DEFRTFND and thus the bank will be charging a penalty of $70 for this overdrawn transaction. To elucidate I had taken a loan on my car and loan repayment was completed last month however when I cross check it with my monthly bank statement the amount of $240 has still been deducted as a monthly instalment.
Thus I would seek an explanation from the bank on this incorrect transaction despite the loan account closure. I am also attaching the loan closure letter for your refrence which I received last month. Furthermore, I would ask you to credit back the amount of 240$ back into my account.
I look forward to your immediate response on the same.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...en deducted as a monthly instalment. Thus I would seek an explanation from the ba...
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Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$240'.
Suggestion: $240
...ld ask you to credit back the amount of 240$ back into my account. I look forward...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80120481928 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85890819631 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9599127801 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398846340403 0.216113520407 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14383187691 0.0766984524023 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887988051568 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209790445551 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917742424434 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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