You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the Bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you
would like them to do about it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to clarify on a letter which I received from the bank in which $240 is overdrawn and thus as a penalty, the bank will be debiting $70 from my account. As you are aware that I am holding a saving bank account with AZ bank for the past fifteen years and I can say that it has been a privilege to be your customer.
The information which I received from the bank is incorrect. To elucidate last week I went to the banking kiosk to withdraw money and instead of debiting $240 from my account only once, the machine debited the money twice as the machine looked faulty. I informed the bank immediately of this transaction and they assured to have taken note of my request. Subsequently, they advised that the $240 would be credited back into my account within 48 hours which has not happened till now.
Hence I would request you to resolve this matter and credit back $240 in my bank account immediately.
I look forward to your immediate resolution on the same.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...urs which has not happened till now. Hence I would request you to resolve this mat...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49468085106 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53554964384 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56914893617 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.481934897 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8888888889 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460401508767 0.216113520407 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178357913725 0.0766984524023 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983283165096 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248527303215 0.12726935374 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146986659244 0.0580467560999 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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