You have had problems with a changing room in a sports center. You have made some complaints but nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the manager stating:
The issues with the changing rooms
What has been done about it
What you want the Manager to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the facilities currently being provided by your sports center located in Brown Street, London. I have been visiting here for last two years for aerobics lessons.
I want to bring your kind attention towards the issues being faced at changing rooms regularly. Firstly, there is no segregation on the basis of gender. Therefore, for women it is quite insecure and uncomfortable too. Secondly, few of the rooms do not have locks in function. Therefore, certain rooms can not be used by females. Lastly, there is a foul smell most of the time and seems like area doesn't get cleaned daily.
Though I have reported aforementioned issues to on-duty security guards number of times but they haven't taken any required action to resolve these issues.
I would like you to ensure that locks will be repaired and hygiene will be maintained regularly. Also, I would be highly grateful to you if separate area for women will be allocated.
I look forward to receiving a prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
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| 2020-02-23 | saipriyanka | 73 | view |
| 2018-11-17 | Ell | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...last two years for aerobics lessons. I want to bring your kind attention towar...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ll most of the time and seems like area doesnt get cleaned daily. Though I have rep...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ecurity guards number of times but they havent taken any required action to resolve th...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07262569832 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75037414004 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709497206704 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1060494662 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8461538462 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147037576153 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416434403754 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379124238341 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065389641197 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420204466646 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.