You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter
• Explain how you learnt about these plans
• Say what you think of the park
• Give your opinion on the plans
Dear Editor,
My name is Jot and I am a resident of Singh’s colony. I am writing to give my opinion about the plans to build a new apartment in a public park.
I came to know about the new apartment plans in the place of the public park yesterday evening in the community hall. I went to an event arranged by the society where the mayor announced the plans and also disclosed that the execution of the plans will start next month.
I was very shocked at listening to the plan and even many people from the society were very disappointed with the plans because the park where the government has decided to build the flats is common to two societies. It is the best refreshment place for many people who are full-time workers. Elderlies use to sit and gossip there for a long time. Children's games are there with different slides. In the morning people use the open gym established in the park a few years ago. This park plays a vital role in everyone’s life.
I would like to recommend that the government should abandon the plan of establishing a new apartment in the place of the park. They should have an opinion from the whole society before executing it.
I look forward to an apt action from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...esterday evening in the community hall. I went to an event arranged by the societ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of the plans will start next month. I was very shocked at listening to the pl...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...le who are full-time workers. Elderlies use to sit and gossip there for a long time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55752212389 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48135028254 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553097345133 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2660416224 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5714285714 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228004632903 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779931888666 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846515243488 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118002927038 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489582889059 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.