You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• Ask for some time off to complete the qualification.
• Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
• Say how the qualification helps your job or company
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in concern about requesting leave for one month (September 2020). As per the norms of the company, it is required to ask for leave ten days in advance but I am asking for leave four months earlier.
I told you earlier that, I am very keen on study and want to get an international certificate in Quality assurance program. I applied for a course at Toronto University and luckily got selected after my tremendous efforts. This is once in a lifetime opportunity as only twenty students get selected every year for this course word wide.
After completion of this course, I will be equipped with different dexterities which will be an asset for our company and help in improving the environment. Additionally, after my return to the job, I will make sure all pendency’s must be clear as a priority and if this needed extra overtime, I am ready for that also.
I hope my application for leave will be granted. I look forward to hearing positive from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Kinnu
- Some people believe that to give opportunities to the new generation companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire Do you agree or disagree 67
- More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style cannot be treated with modern medicines Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged To what extent do you agree 73
- Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists To what extent do you agree 73
- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel Task Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving what type of rooms you would like and ask them how much the weekend will co 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d every year for this course word wide. After completion of this course, I will ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ded extra overtime, I am ready for that also. I hope my application for leave wi...
^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive from your end. Yours Faithfully, Kinnu ...
^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m your end. Yours Faithfully, Kinnu
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76111111111 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7689359279 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672222222222 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5192093371 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156603259242 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619433344725 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185638490218 0.0603063233224 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686435278335 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357234003354 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.