You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter:
Explain how you learnt about these plans
Say what you think of the park
Give your opinion of the plans
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention to the construction that will start next month in Terrace garden.
I got this information from one of my friends who is employed in real tech builders. My source of information is authentic because he is also a part of the project. Moreover, the builder already got no objection certificate from the municipal corporation.
This park is the only place for children in that area to play some sports activities such as cricket, football and so on. Besides, it is the best place for elderly people to socialize with their friends and spend a good time and some people in this area use this park to do walk and jogging.
After starting the construction, many trees will be cut down and it will increase air pollution. In addition, it will create noise pollution due to machines and equipment, which will be used in construction. I think you should reconsider the decision because it will be harmful to our area and city.
yours faithfully,
Priyanka Tuli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...l start next month in Terrace garden. I got this information from one of my fr...
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...cate from the municipal corporation. This park is the only place for children...
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...use this park to do walk and jogging. After starting the construction, many tr...
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... be harmful to our area and city. yours faithfully, Priyanka Tuli
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... yours faithfully, Priyanka Tuli
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, then, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76287720397 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653409090909 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5015941661 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108547721645 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439896836511 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540455476774 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604455431068 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597861002163 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.