You have just bought a new mobile phone from a website on the internet. When it was delivered, the phone was faulty.
Write a letter to the website. In the letter:
introduce yourself
explain the situation
state what action you want to be taken
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Kevin and I am working as a consultant in a telecom firm.I was in need of a latest mobile phone because most of my work depends on it.As an old client of your mobile company, I ordered it from the website on the internet.I am writing this letter to express my utter disappointment as there are many faults with a brand new Samsung handset.
After using it for a while, some problems started to appear. First problem is with its camera. The moment I started clicking pics, it gets shut down suddenly without any sign or warning appearing on screen.Second drawback is its battery. Generally, the battery of any new phone works for around 15-20 hours without charging it again. But in this case, to my surprise battery got finished almost after seven hours. Really disappointed to discover such kind of faults in an expensive mobile.
I request you to either replace this phone with a brand new model after thorough checking or give my all money back.
Looking forward for some positive action related to this matter.
Yours sincerely,
John Williams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rking as a consultant in a telecom firm.I was in need of a latest mobile phone be...
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...tant in a telecom firm.I was in need of a latest mobile phone because most of my ...
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...e because most of my work depends on it.As an old client of your mobile company, I...
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...red it from the website on the internet.I am writing this letter to express my ut...
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...any sign or warning appearing on screen.Second drawback is its battery. Generally, the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...positive action related to this matter. Yours sincerely, John Williams ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ed to this matter. Yours sincerely, John Williams
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, really, second, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85026737968 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54114811198 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679144385027 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.9443381815 44.8134815571 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144614755736 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373881073904 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573350708252 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845652529172 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636932816013 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.