You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear James,
I have just moved to California from India with my family and is living next door from our house. Since we are new to this place, my husband and I were planning to hold a party so that we get to know our neighbours and make new friends.
We have planned the party for next Saturday at 6 pm, with amazing food, music and drinks. Some of the dishes will be Indian as we wanted everybody to experience them. I am sure everyone will love it. However the loud music might be an issue but we will try to keep that in check as much as we can. We have also planned some interesting games.
We invite you and your family to kindly join us on Saturday. It will be fun and we will get a chance to know each other. Also our house is baby proof hence you can get your children along, our daughter will be thrilled to have a peer group. We have made all the necessary arrangements for the kids as well. Hope to see you at the party
Yours Sincerely
Richa
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- You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letterintroduce yourselfdescribe your plans for the partyinvite your neighbour to com 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...m, with amazing food, music and drinks. Some of the dishes will be Indian as we wanted ever...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... them. I am sure everyone will love it. However the loud music might be an issue but we...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e will get a chance to know each other. Also our house is baby proof hence you can g...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14893617021 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10807475581 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1157114654 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190096947648 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734996533646 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682254881504 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113442210326 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048004618051 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.