You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbour to come.
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I am inscribing this epistle to draw your attention towards organising a get together in my apartment that is next to your door. However, I shall be afraid that this would cause inconvenience to your family due to the volume of music system.
I recently moved from India to Canada with my spouse and one kid last month. Well, I joined as an associate lecturer at Seneca College, Toronto. However, I decided to give a party as it is the only medium that allows us to know about our neighbourhood. Furthermore, I plan a theme party that represents culture of everyone. As everyone dressed nicely in their own traditional outfits and there is speech by all in which they express their culture. In this way, we understand each other backgrounds. Apart from this, I order indo-canadian cousins as well as decorated my house with lights and balloons in order to warm welcome all guests. There would be plethora of games, dance performance and at the end gifts given to winners.
I invited you along with your family to come and make our evening beautiful. I hope you will accept my invitation. I await to get favourable a reply from you.
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and one kid last month. Well, I joined as an associate lecturer at Seneca Colle...
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...culture of everyone. As everyone dressed nicely in their own traditional outfits ...
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...I order indo-canadian cousins as well as decorated my house with lights and ballo...
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...plethora of games, dance performance and at the end gifts given to winners. I ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... I hope you will accept my invitation. I await to get favourable a reply from yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76699029126 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7355564192 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669902912621 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5539575208 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1428571429 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19306791611 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619105682908 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760007383565 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13467357377 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726418264767 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.