You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Ololade Amusan and am your new neighbour. I moved into Block 1,flat 5 with my wife on the 10th of December to flat number 12. I am writing to let you know that I will be organising a party for my family and friends. But i am a bit concerned with the loud noise disturbing you.
Even though the event is schedule to commence at 2pm, some guests will start arriving before we begin. I decided to hire a live band for the occasion and i have giving them a stern warning not to be overly loud while trying to entertain the partygoers. Also , the catering service will be on standby to provide food and drinks for everyone. This is just to reduce the movement on the upper part on the building which i know could be a nuisance to you.
I am using this medium to invite you and your family to my party. It is just a three hour event that will be rounded off before half past four o' clock. You could come along with your children if you do not mind as it is not strictly for adults.
I hope my party would not be a burden to you.
Yours faithfully,
Olo Ade
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he 10th of December to flat number 12. I am writing to let you know that I will b...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... a party for my family and friends. But i am a bit concerned with the loud noise ...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., some guests will start arriving before we begin. I decided to hire a live band ...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...trying to entertain the partygoers. Also , the catering service will be on standby...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...on the upper part on the building which i know could be a nuisance to you. I a...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1261682243 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20253062575 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4230517848 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9230769231 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251471479747 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932877998965 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809636751651 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13490052613 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850513119424 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.