Dear Mr Brown,
I hope you and your family are all doing well. I am your new neighbour since I moved into the adjacent flat of yours last week. I am a Doctor by profession and yesterday I received extremely exciting news of the approval of my post graduation application in "Green Valley" university. In fact, I am writing to you in reference to this good news only because all my friends and relatives are insisting me to throw a party at my place. Hence, I not only want to take your permission to do so but indeed want to heartily invite you along with your family at this merry occasion.
Although, it will be a simple celebration however, there will be savoury food cooked by my lovely parents who also happen to be marvellous chefs. Additionally, party will comprise of few games to entertain everyone such as Tam-bola, Musical chair and the most amazing Truth or Dare. Further, my cousins and peers are going to perform too as some of them are outstanding singers and dancers so you will witness some great music as well.
Lastly, I am very keen to meet your family because being neighbours, it is mandatory that we must be in good terms as we may invariably help each other in need and getting familiar in such a positive milieu will be an awesome beginning of our friendship. Party will start at sharp 6 PM on 22nd December.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o the adjacent flat of yours last week. I am a Doctor by profession and yesterday...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: WILL_COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'will be composed of' or 'will comprise' or 'will consist of'?
Suggestion: will be composed of; will comprise; will consist of
...e marvellous chefs. Additionally, party will comprise of few games to entertain everyone such as...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...vellous chefs. Additionally, party will comprise of few games to entertain everyone such as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, lastly, look, may, so, well, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64682539683 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66227848982 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1631492542 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5833333333 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243891353031 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107176709405 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119824014354 0.0603063233224 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111990237134 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10663426404 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.