You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter,
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mr. Andrw,
I have just shifted into a new home which is next door to in last month were planning a party and inviting some friends with neighbors.
I am an assistant professor of a university and just moved here with my two children and a husband. In addition, due to two minutes walking distance of work place to my home, its convenience for me. However, bought a new home was my dream which I reached after a while. Now I have decided to doing a party with my friends and neighbors. In a party we are using heavy sound systems for dancing which can make some noise. DJ means playing songs with some heavy musical instruments which are bid noisy. I am worried about it and could you please allow me only one night for DJ party. Moreover, I also would like to invite you with whole family to my party which is held on 27th of march.
My apology for any inconvenience it might cause to you, but I assure you that I have already made arrangements to make it less noisy by a plan to conduct games for children and keep them engaged. We will also place soundproof coverage at the entrance of my house.
Hope you will accept my invitation and join the party.
Yours sincerely,
najam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and join the party. Yours sincerely, najam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41891891892 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39326575294 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9495329367 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4615384615 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211017570487 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748718925108 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599941357663 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114438791208 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365787873235 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.