Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
The problem of environment, population and education which were always debatable has become more contentious with many people calming that it is hazardous while others disagree. In my opinion, the environment pollution, over population and leak of schooling systems will be bought more drawbacks in next ten years. This essay will explain the reasons attributing to this trend along with remedial measures in the looming paragraphs.
To begin, there are numerous causes to destroy environment. Firstly, deforestation is one of the main reason for affecting atmosphere due to cutting trees. For example, in Bangladesh has only 25% of forest as deforestation occur by some peoples. Moreover, many undeveloped countries have higher birth rate than developing countries due to leak of family planning and education. To take an example, a survey done by 'India Government' in 2019 around 20% of family have at least five children of each family in many rural area. Furthermore, some countries have inevitable demerits of education owing to over population. For instance, a few proportion of population of Bangladesh educated because of densely population in village.
However, every problem has some solutions. Besides, people should be used proper disposal system for waste garbage and planting more trees to make green world . In addition, authority can more concern about birth rate. If they provide workshop about family planning, would be less birth in future. Lastly, government should take some initiatives for education system , For example, providing distance learning to rural area where unable to commutate by road using advance technology. Hence, it is clearly stated that next 10 years we have to take above initiatives to prevent those issues.
In conclusion, according to the arguments mentioned above one can reach to conclusion that the problem of environment, population and education are too dire to ignore. nevertheless its potentials merits cannot be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51307189542 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89736119409 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8980967893 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7222222222 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215166518552 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586444956821 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440152570666 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125132667378 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326392841663 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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