In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
The significance of children's achievement which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it in beneficial while others against. However, children are sometimes said that they can gain everything it tory hard and soul in few countries. This essay will elaborate attributing this trend with merits and demerits in the looming paragraph.
To begin with, most of parents advise children to win every competition with effort. which made them ambitious. To take an example, many school going children are getting more inspiration from families, when they to participant in all events and win there. For example, a survey "a pre-school in Bangladesh in 2022 children are more concern with studies as well as outdoor activities than youngers. Moreover, a large number of children who are eight to ten years old are interesting on science fiction and learn how to make software, game, website and so on. Thus, it is clearly mentioned that why are encourage children to become more confident to win.
On the other hand, sometimes it would be becoming danger for ahool going children. Besides, they can be survived with several diseases such as brain damage, head pain, eye problem and so on. To take an example, a survey done by a number of pediatricians in whole world in few years ago, most of the school going children suffered with extreme backpain along with eye problem due to take heavy backpack and give pressure on research project. Therefore, parents should be more concerned to tackle this problem.
In conclusion, according to the arguments mention above, one can reach to a conclusion that the advantages of children’s achievement are instrumental indeed while it has some drawbacks. However, people should be ensured to manage children’s worksheet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...n to win every competition with effort. which made them ambitious. To take an example...
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n to win every competition with effort. which made them ambitious. To take an example...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...oor activities than youngers. Moreover, a large number of children who are eight to ten years old...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...s. Moreover, a large number of children who are eight to ten years old are interesting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22602739726 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79477234965 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9393200621 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235657583547 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787315571424 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508857471393 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156293205363 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372253679876 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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