You have just read an artice in an international travel magazine which contained
some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
-Correct the information in the article
-explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
-suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to an wrong information provided about the Ambaji temple, located at Ahmedabad and how it can be corrected.
Although most of the details given in your magazine are correct, in the article of dated 25th August; it is mentioned that the Ambaji temple is a tourist destination with good accommodation facilities and best suitable for elderly; however weather is extremely cold which does not suits to old age visitors and people having respiratory disorders. Besides, while hotels are not available near this temple, tourist can live in cottages which are safe, neat and clean.
It is absolutely crucial to give correct information because many readers plan their holidays based on the details provided in your magazine which is one of the most trustworthy publication. If you provide any incorrect or incomplete information, it would impact your brand equity.
It would like to suggest you to correct the information provided in the earlier article and rewrite whole script once again. This would not only beneficial for the regular readers but also good for you to maintain transparency.
Hope you would understand importance of the correcting details and provide correct one in next article.
Yours faithfully,
Smith Gandhi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36231884058 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75728208474 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.2862553416 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26511809474 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10173415885 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505385306227 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135047221393 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446578187468 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 8.37731958763 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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