You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to the article on Singapore published in this month's issue. According to the article, Singapore purifies the water drained from toilets and uses it for drinking. However, this is absolutely incorrect and preposterous that such an acclaimed magazine as yours could make such a grave mistake. The drainage water that is purified is not consumed, but used to water the plants on the streets.
Let me explain in detail. To begin with Singapore imports drinking water from Malaysia. In addition, there are some desalination plants installed along the coast. However, this water is not fit for consumption and can be used to carry out non portable activities. Next your magazine is widely read by people around the world. Moreover, many rely on your articles to gain knowledge about a place and also use them as a guide while making travel plans. Therefore, publishing untrue information may misguide the people and portray Singapore in a bad light.
In order to rectify the error, I would be grateful if you could recheck your facts, research more and publish the same in the next month's issue. Please feel free to reach out to me via amandaroberts@gmail.com or 98765432 if you need more information.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Amanda Roberts
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... months issue. According to the article, Singapore purifies the water drained fro...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'waters'.
Suggestion: waters
...make such a grave mistake. The drainage water that is purified is not consumed, but u...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07727272727 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85154373154 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4197748483 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18825304965 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567303235533 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049899308356 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100619153523 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314407668567 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.