Dear Mr Sam
I hope your day is going great. When I was traveling to Peru on the 23rd of January 2023, I read your article entitled "A brief History About Nigerian Tribes". I came across the part where you wrote that Kings are called "Odogwu" in Igbo Language. This information is incorrect.
The Igbos who are part of the tribes in Nigeria call their King "Eze" rather than the information given in your article. This Nigerian tribe is the only tribe who refer to their Kings as Eze given that their language is very unique. However, people also bear Eze as a name in the Igbo tribe.
It is expedient that your magazine publishes the right information so that the readers will be informed with the right information. People need to be able to communicate the right facts, and they need to be confident that the information is accurate whenever a conversation ensues.
In my opinion, I suggest that your team should endeavor to always crosscheck any information on ground before making it public. This will help eliminate errors, and dissiminate the right information to the readers because they need articles with accurate informations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...ngs as Eze given that their language is very unique. However, people also bear Eze as a nam...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05128205128 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92978986261 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7548271408 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5454545455 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185794637976 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771970088466 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597467310294 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113350566933 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456571298631 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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