In the past, it is true that knowledge was contained in books, but, recently, all the knowledge has been uploaded to the internet. Technology has redefined a lot of things which leads me to the discussion about its advantages.
On the one hand, the internet is a game changer because of the ability of storing all forms of soft copy documents on the cloud. In this regard, people who live in public spaces do not have to worry about the revelation of their ideas rather they should make use of the internet to store those ideas in emails. Unlike books, the Internet does not occupy physical space, so there's no need to worry about the position of shelves where books are going to be kept. Security is an added avantage when it comes to the internet. Once the password has been activated on you computer, only those who know the password can gain access to the information. The internet records the time, day and year whenever a knowledge is created, so this gives the confidence needed about the details of creation. Below, let's look at the disadvantages associated with the internet.
On the other hand, there are opinions that do not conform with uploading knowledge to the internet. In this case, someone who looses his phone and forgets the password to his email would wish that knowledge was in a book. Similarly, one cannot have access to the internet until there is power made available on your gadgets. In addition, books are handy and the informations there-in are accessible whenever it is needed.
To conclude, it is evident that the advantages of uploading knowledge to the internet outweighs its disadvantages. It has never been this awesome until the arrival of technology!
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, similarly, so, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83161512027 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61781699828 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4482493964 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397269519291 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120897265421 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122336784854 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25275590845 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515067285073 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.