Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request the rectification of erroneous information being published in Sunday's newsletter.
As you are aware that the article is about the major tourist attractions near our town. I was surprised to notice that Geneva Lake has been included in the list as one of the \must-visit places which is misleading for holidaymakers and tourists as there is no lake whatsoever in the close vicinity of our town. It is tremendously important to make the correction on an immediate basis because thousands of subscribers rely on the facts and figures published in the article and they would be devastated if they were unable to find this place during their visit. Visitors might resent this by never visiting our town again and this would affect the tourism sector.
I would like to request the editor to recall the published newsletter and post the correction on official media accounts. Furthermore, the organization must take special care before printing the magazine by seeking endorsement by the locals about the sites included in it.
I hope the prompt action will be taken on this.
Yours sincerely,
Ammar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng published in Sundays newsletter. As you are aware that the article is about...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11052631579 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81431343507 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8857974939 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143110041557 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567863705442 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400383078002 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587363236171 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382935608199 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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