You have just read a book and found it useful. write a letter to your friend:
• Tell her/him about the book
• Explain her/him why it is useful
• Suggest how she/he can have it.
Dear Shiva,
Do you remember our last intense discussion on basics of investment? Well, I think, I found a perfect book, which provides easy to understand language and fundamentals of investment for beginner.
The tile of the book is The Investopedia 101 and the book is written by renowned businessman Warren Buffet. It is his life’s work because it contain real life example from his journey from rag to rich that is just by investing wisely.
The book clearly describes all the strategies to bear in my mind before jumping in to investment, which is quite beneficial for novice. It also has collection of outstanding algorithm to predict the rise and fall of the market, which will be useful throughout the life. Why don’t you give it a try? It can boost your career as a successful investor.
You can get this book almost everywhere as it is considered as some sort of bible in business. However, the cheapest copy is available on Amazon, which provides, along with book, CD material for free.
I hope you like the book and don’t forget to share your thoughts once you finish it.
Best wishes,
Sandip
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contains'?
Suggestion: contains
.... It is his life's work because it contain real life example from his journey from...
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Line 14, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you finish it. Best wishes, Sandip
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, i think, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9170984456 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7560286363 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673575129534 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7752858655 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181393344055 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626941778454 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042745869723 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100511469233 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279834164683 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.