You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is John Paul and I am writing this letter to mention a problem regarding my credit card statement issued by your bank.
I am a saving account holder in your bank for more than a year. I am a business man, and this account is mainly used for transactions and depositing of cheques and sometimes buying of merchandises related to my business, such as electronic appliances.
However, the statement depicts certain purchases like furniture items and branded clothes. I do not utilize this credit card for buying household or personal items as it is particularly operated to maintain business transactions. Furthermore, the cities from which those purchases are mad, I did not visit them since the last one year. Therefore, I firmly state that those items are enlisted in the statement by mistake.
In the wake of this explanation, I would like you to revert me the amount, mentioned against those items, deducted from my account, and also issue me a certificate that this kind of blunder will not occur again in future since it is my business account and I cannot afford these kind of mistakes. I hope that you would take prompt action on this matter.
I look forward seeing proceedings in reverting the amount.
Yours faithfully,
John Paul.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 274, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...my business account and I cannot afford these kind of mistakes. I hope that you would take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97695852535 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76353264889 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5083067342 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1818181818 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189462868505 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652156493066 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407078155536 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864200049968 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580915431582 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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