you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions on how to send it back to you
Dear Matt,
Hope you are doing well. First of all, I would like to thank you for your amazing company and the hospitality during our trip to your home town Manali. I am still in trance with the exotic valleys, mesmerizing mountains and the panoramic views of the lake. I can say that visiting Manali was a one-off alluring experience which I had in a while. Now I feel completely fresh and rejuvenated.
However, as you know of trips finishes without any problems. A problem-free trip is not our cup of tea. I am writing to say that when I reached home I realized that I had forgotten my wallet at your house. If, I remember correctly I have kept it on the cabinet in the drawing room and may have missed it as I was in a hurry to catch the bus. The wallet contains some cash, credit card and most importantly my student ID card which I need while entering the university gates therefore without this card my life will become miserable
Hence I would request you to send me the wallet as soon as possible through a speed post at my mailing address.
I look forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Warm wishes
Said
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2020-01-07 | Andi777 | 56 | view |
2020-01-04 | Bharat11189 | 73 | view |
2019-12-23 | AMAN CHAHAL | 73 | view |
2019-12-11 | igasmr | 73 | view |
2019-12-11 | igasmr | 73 | view |
- Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter•Explain why you have moved•Describe the new house•Invite your friend to come and visit 73
- write a letter complaining about accommodation 11
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,You are going to another country to study. You 73
- You have seen an advertisement in your local newspaper for a hotel receptionist Write a letter of application to the hotel manager Write about your experience and qualifications and say why you would like the job Also state when you would be available for 83
- You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting.Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Matt, Hope you are doing well. First of all, I...
^^^
Line 4, column 532, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this card my life will become miserable Hence I would request you to send me the...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...card my life will become miserable Hence I would request you to send me the wall...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse and seeing you soon. Warm wishes Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, i feel, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42583732057 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47946627879 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5777649837 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0833333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 4.34317383033 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278788688001 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877447340338 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859018286443 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177757075537 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376749446279 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.