You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain the situation
say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my displeasure regarding some problems with a new camera bought from your store recently. Let me explain in detail.
My name is Saad a local resident of Plymouth locality. Since your shop is located in the close vicinity of our locality, therefore, I buy most of the electronic products from your store. Although I have had a positive experience with the electronic products bought from your store however last week was an exception. To elucidate I had bought a new digital camera from your store which turned out to be faulty. After hours of discussion with your online service team the fault was diagnosed and it turned out to some fault with the software of the product which made the camera to shut down abruptly.
Lastly, I was told to return the camera to your store and was promised repair of the product with a week however it has been almost two weeks now. Despite my constant follow up with your customer support no resolution has been provided till date except false promises. Hence I would request you to check with your team internally and provide a free replacement of the product as it is still covered under warranty.
Looking forward to your immediate response and resolution.
Yours sincerely
Saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my displeasure r...
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Line 4, column 602, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... made the camera to shut down abruptly. Lastly, I was told to return the camera ...
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Line 6, column 270, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ovided till date except false promises. Hence I would request you to check with your ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse and resolution. Yours sincerely Saad
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, lastly, look, regarding, so, still, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82488479263 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50671759883 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589861751152 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3716741389 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201609920343 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708456207768 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523691049337 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112526604026 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498538319219 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.