You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you go home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
In your letter :
Thank your friend for the holiday.
Explain that you left your wallet in their house.
Give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear jane,
I hope you are doing well. I have just arrived at my home. First of all, I would like to say thanks to you because I enjoyed a lot with you last week, and we had the best days of our life. I was happy that finally I got leisure time from my hectic schedule which made me able to spend quality time with you.
Further more, at the last day of that holidays, we were too busy in gossiping, and couldn't know that how time passed. At that last moment, I was in too hurry in order to caught the cab which I booked to went at railway station. In that hassle, I forgot to take my wallet which can be on your living room where we set. Therefore, it would be grateful, if you help me to return that bag to me.
As I talked with our common friend in the morning whose name is james, and I got to know that she is now in the vadodra. Fortunately, she stays in the hotel which is nearby your home and after completing her work, she will be come back at Ahmedabad on the day after tomorrow. That is why can you please go there to give it to her ? through which I can get it back to me.
I am sorry to disturb you. I hope we will meet soon and I will give you a little gift as a reward for helping me.
Yours lovingly,
X. Y. Z.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ays, we were too busy in gossiping, and couldnt know that how time passed. At that last...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to hurry'?
Suggestion: to hurry
...e passed. At that last moment, I was in too hurry in order to caught the cab which I book...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... That is why can you please go there to give it to her ? through which I can get...
^^
Line 11, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Through
...ou please go there to give it to her ? through which I can get it back to me. I a...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orry to disturb you. I hope we will meet soon and I will give you a little gift a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, therefore, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 3.03092783505 495% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 3.94071146245 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00545245361 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573122529644 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8294951759 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4666666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267631790107 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953090179125 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636283248908 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153567741976 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553090206808 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.28 8.71597938144 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.