You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house.
Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it.
Make some suggestions about how to get it back.
Dear Max,
Thank you for lending your house on weekend. there was so fantastic.
I am writing this letter to ask your favor for my problem I left my coat in your house.
Do you remember when I came your house? I was wearing black coat seem likes animal.
I can't make sure where it is. maybe it had on hanger. Beacuse, I always hung it there.
And then, I left wallet, USB that I should use in my office in coat pockets.
Could you please give that to my friend John? I already gave your phone number.
As soon as he is going call you to come your house for taking it.
If you don't want to call with him, please call me.
Say it once more, thanks for lending.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
David
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... you for lending your house on weekend. there was so fantastic. I am writing this le...
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Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...earing black coat seem likes animal. I cant make sure where it is. maybe it had on ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... come your house for taking it. If you dont want to call with him, please call me. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 604.0 937.175257732 64% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28368794326 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.9385717577 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687943262411 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 174.6 290.88556701 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 8.0 16.3608247423 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.383820162 44.8134815571 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 37.75 76.5299724578 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.8125 16.8248392259 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.4375 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328875619487 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877699604953 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746009213418 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12341507493 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686789830193 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.1 8.37731958763 37% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 97.2 70.7449484536 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 1.7 7.45979381443 23% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.77 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.71 7.59969072165 75% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 8.54432989691 61% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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