You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting.
They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.
Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
Dear Sir/Madam
The reason I'm writing this letter to you is that I have had some problem with my flatmate.
So, I'd like to ask you to move a single room next term.
Thesedays, I couldn't sleep well. Because, my roommate invited his friends regardless of time,
even if it's 3a.m. And then they had a party until morning and they borrew my thing without asking.
I have very important examination to my study next week. So I should study hard for that, however
I couldn't all. This's why I want to move a single room.
I look forward to hearing from you.
your sincerely,
David
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir/Madam The reason Im writing this letter to you is that I ha...
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Suggestion: I'd
...had some problem with my flatmate. So, Id like to ask you to move a single room n...
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Suggestion: couldn't
... single room next term. Thesedays, I couldnt sleep well. Because, my roommate invite...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...So I should study hard for that, however I couldnt all. Thiss why I want to move ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...should study hard for that, however I couldnt all. Thiss why I want to move a single ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
... I look forward to hearing from you. your sincerely, David
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 488.0 937.175257732 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 206.0 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60377358491 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 3.78020617076 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31030012121 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.754716981132 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 141.3 290.88556701 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3989920555 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.2222222222 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7777777778 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259110715787 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873771540618 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691585072862 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109299030832 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698677141584 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 41.2886597938 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.