You have just spent a weekend at a friends house. When you returned home. You left a ciat containing some belonging in his house.tell him or her that you left your coat
Tell what it look like
Where you think you left and what was inside it
Make some suggestion about how to . get it back
Dear Mohan
We have reached here on monday.first of all I would like to express my gratitude for Your hospitality which you provide us during our stay at your house. Futher more my purpose of writing to onform you about my misplaced coat perhaps at your lovely coat.
I want to express the appearance of this coat is lije Official coats and it contains white colour amd little bit lond in size rather than usu as l coats. The most important thing I want to bring in knowledge tgat it has some valuable things like gold ring and a chain.while I was going for gaving bathI put these jewelries in the upper pocket of the coat.
It may be ganging in the bathroom or lying on the cot inside your house. I will have to go to ludhiana on next sunday therefore, I am in need of thus coat as well as jewellary.
My cousin Aman comes to your town daily as he is a conductor so send these undeniable things by him as soon as possible.
I am looking forward to hearing from you pay my regards to parents and love to your kids.
You
Your friend
Rakesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mohan We have reached here on monday....
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...day.first of all I would like to express my gratitude for Your hospitality which...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll I would like to express my gratitude for Your hospitality which you provide u...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hospitality which you provide us during our stay at your house. Futher more my p...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...form you about my misplaced coat perhaps at your lovely coat. I want to expre...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at. I want to express the appearance of this coat is lije Official coats and...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ppearance of this coat is lije Official coats and it contains white colour amd l...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... coats and it contains white colour amd little bit lond in size rather than usu as l coats...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... than usu as l coats. The most important thing I want to bring in knowledge tgat...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tant thing I want to bring in knowledge tgat it has some valuable things like go...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...go to ludhiana on next sunday therefore, I am in need of thus coat as well as jew...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...coat as well as jewellary. My cousin Aman comes to your town daily as he is a...
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Line 14, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... love to your kids. You Your friend Rakesh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35175879397 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33688333289 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663316582915 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2691521146 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207492426405 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101878279115 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939824696539 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914458255491 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640618288683 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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