Dear Sir/Mam
I am writing this letter to you with regard to my bag that I left in room number 225 in Lilo Hotel Adelaide on 27th October.
My name is John, I came to the hotel Lilo for spending my weekend on 25th October at 5:00 pm and stayed in room 225 on the second floor that was having a beautiful view of the lake outside the window.
Moreover, my bag is an Adidas brand, and its color is brown. The bag is very spacious having size 12 inches wide and long. The bag has two compartments in which I kept my personal identification cards and academic certificates along with the mobile charger.
Actually, Sunday 27th October was my returning day. I was going to be late for my flight to London and forget to carry my bag that was placed in one of the cabinets of the cupboard. After reaching my home, I found that my bag was left in the hotel room.
I want to make a request to you to send my bag through courier service at my address 9249 122 st, London, V3V 4L4. I will be responsible to pay the delivery charges.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
John
- You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English overseas Write to the recruitment office In your letter Tell them where you saw the advertisement Explain why you would like to go Describe the skills that you have that you think woul
- You are going to move out of your apartment in an English speaking country Your landlord is a very good person who has assisted you a lot during your stay Meanwhile your friend would like to rent the apartment after you write a letter to your landlord in 44
- You have decided to leave your current employment Write a letter to your employer Include the following in your letter Explain why you are writing Explain why you have decided to leave the company Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your 89
- Some people believe that the government should spend money on art and education Others say most schools should be privately funded Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel Write a letter to the manager of the hotel In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the bag and its content Describe how 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, second, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16129032258 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31779674586 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8188247451 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247779900725 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948900011034 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789103556359 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135712839929 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825860817751 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.