You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter,
Describe the item
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inquire about a travel bag which I lost in transit from Delhi to Mumbai. Let me explain the incident in detail.
To elucidate the bag was turquoise green is colour with steel handles and had my name was engraved on both the steel handles. The bag was of sentimental value to me as it rejuvenated memories of exciting trips to some of the alluring destinations across the globe. Since it was an overnight journey to Mumbai so I had kept the bag in the storage compartment right above my seat however when I arrived in Mumbai I found the bag missing. Although I tried to search for my bag on the train however I could not find it, therefore, I lodged a complaint with the railway staff in Mumbai. For your information, I was seated in lower berth compartment A seat no 42.
Lastly, I would request you to kindly look into this matter as the bag contains official documents which I have to submit to my office failing which my office management can take disciplinary action against me. Hence I look forward to immediate help in locating the bag. Once the bag is located please give me a call I will personally come and collect it.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...juvenated memories of exciting trips to some of the alluring destinations across the globe....
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 212, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...an take disciplinary action against me. Hence I look forward to immediate help in loc...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, lastly, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50462962963 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58284792333 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0781563397 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4545454545 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0919419268489 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311573547315 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332776833589 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567859817581 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186513855052 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.