You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter,Describe the itemExplain where and when you left itSay what action you would like the company to take.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to report you the case of missing handbag during my travel to Mumbai through Sinhagad Express, last Week.

To give you full account details, I started my journey on morning 6th Oct 2019, 6 AM & reached Dadar Station around 10:30 AM. As I was getting late to Office, in the rush, I forgot to collect my black leather handbag that was kept under my seat (Coach: S2, Seat Number 51). It was a large black leather handbag with brown zip and 3 front compartments. It contained my degree certificates, few important office papers, wallet with 2 Debit cards and cash of 550 Rs.

Can you please check if any of the railway staff has found the same? As the bag contains all my degree documents & wallet, may I request your due attention and support in finding my missing bag.

Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Thanking you.

Yours faithfully,
Prajakta Bhatt

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ding my missing bag. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Thanking you. Yours ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7106918239 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38034918995 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.754716981132 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1822431418 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141532156618 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750468595926 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689534092154 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933452632249 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422179330599 0.0580467560999 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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