You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter•Describe the item•Explain where and when you left it•Say what action you would like the company to take

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You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter•Describe the item•Explain where and when you left it•Say what action you would like the company to take

Submitted by Swa on Thu, 02/07/2019 - 08:21

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I have lost a valuable item on South Coast Express on 23, August. My ticket number is 6357 and I travelled between Chicago and Cleveland stations.

The article in question is Iphone 6s. It is a limited edition version and blue color mobile encased in sunflower themed plastic case. Also, there is a message "Be happy" engraved on the backside and on the front the screen is protected with a guerilla glass cover.

During the journey, I used the phone to spoke with a friend for few minutes and as far as I remember that was the last time I have seen my phone. Surely, I have left it somewhere in the train because I could not find it when searched immediately after getting down the vehicle.

As it is matter of urgency, I am requesting you to check with lost and found department for the phone. Please let me know if you have it or not. I really appreciate your help.

Awaiting your response.

Best wishes,
Sreeja

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...m on South Coast Express on 23, August. my ticket number is 6357 and I travelled b...
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... The article in question is Iphone 6s. it is a limited edition version and blue c...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... protected with a guerilla glass cover. During the journey, I used the phone to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your response. Best wishes, Sreeja
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62711864407 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48620953074 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8465889922 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.25 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175494356329 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524100494235 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591204414927 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880928644338 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626299705993 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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