Dear sir/madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention of an item that I had lost on my train journey from Toronto to Ottawa on July 14. Allow me to elaborate.
I am a frequent traveler between the Toronto and Ottawa and on my last journey, I lost my silver pendant which was gifted to me by my mother on my 12th birthday. It has left me feeling desolate.
I was booked in coach X and the seat number was ALX in the economy section. The time when I was boarding it got stuck in the overhead compartment baggage and the chain broke. I picked it up and had held it in my hand the whole time. The last time I saw it was at the time I was preparing for deboarding the train. I did not find it again. I have an apprehension that it might have got stuck between the two seats because of my carelessness.
As such, I request you to kindly arrange someone who could inspect the mentioned seats in the compartment and inform me if the said pendant is traced.
I will look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/madam, I am writing to bring to your attention ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to your reply. Yours faithfully, Brad Jason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26903553299 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4796629585 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8995497255 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6923076923 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107880512057 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344685309378 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349588052726 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596083488238 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345888944445 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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