You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
• Describe the item
• Explain where and when you left it
• Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir
I am inscribing this missive to report the loss of a valuable item on your train.
I was traveling from New Delhi to Agra to visit Taj Mahal, on 27th march 2018. At 5:00 pm, I de-board the train, as I was using my laptop during the journey,upon getting off, I realized that, I have left my laptop bag on the seat itself. By then, the train had already left the station. It is a leather bag with apple bran laptopn, silver in color. The inital of my name R is embossed on the front side of the bag towards left corner.
I was sitting on the seat number 24 of the compartment 5a. I have not moved from my side until I got off the train. Therefore, I would like to request you to assist me in finding my laptop. If you find it, please contact me at 00987554. I will pick it as soon as possible. You can also annnounce a little award from my side as well.
I hope to hear a prompt and positive action from your side.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely
Anand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Dear Sir I am inscribing this missive to report the loss of a valuable item on...
^^
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , upon
...I was using my laptop during the journey,upon getting off, I realized that, I have le...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: silver
... a leather bag with apple bran laptopn, silver in color. The inital of my name R is embossed on...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19576719577 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27078457477 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7630095033 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.6428571429 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184815218459 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632550645984 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544665150344 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966344777197 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383500482091 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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