You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter
- explain how you lost the card
- ask the manager to cancel the old card and
- issue you a replacement
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I would like to draw your attention on issue of my misplaced ATM card. I was attacked last night by armed men on my way home from work. They made away with my gadgets along with money and the credit card inside my bag.
However, I was advised immediately to go and deactivate the card to avoid my account being hacked which I am requesting for. Although am curious already that the armed robbers might attempt to do the same.
Moreover, I would like to apply for another card immediately as I have urgent transactions to carryout in a forthnight. I don't mind the charge but I need to collect the card on or before next two weeks.
Am looking forward to receive your response.
Your's Faithfully,
Innocent
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ney and the credit card inside my bag. However, I was advised immediately to go...
^^^^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...being hacked which I am requesting for. Although am curious already that the armed robbe...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... robbers might attempt to do the same. Moreover, I would like to apply for anot...
^^^
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sactions to carryout in a forthnight. I dont mind the charge but I need to collect t...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: Am I
...he card on or before next two weeks. Am looking forward to receive your respons...
^^
Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...e next two weeks. Am looking forward to receive your response. Yours Faithfully, I...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eive your response. Yours Faithfully, Innocent
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 610.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 131.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65648854962 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53322425052 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709923664122 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 290.88556701 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5108266385 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7777777778 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166383191573 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684536467669 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433052489564 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872366955396 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324220037242 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.