There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently,
Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter
Describe the problems
explain how these problems are affecting the public
suggest what changes could be made
dear Albrighton,
How are you? it's being long since we speak. I am writing to notify you that I am no longer working for the cinema as my contract with them has expired. Although I planned to quit before due to the nature of work and the condition as it is affecting my health mentality but I was advised to stay till the end of the contract.
Besides, I have gotten another job at an energy generating company as an inventory officer which is about five kilometers away from the location of my former job. at least it is not as hectic as the former. Also, there are benefits attached to the job like transport and house allowances. you can't imagine how excited I am along with my family.
Less I forget, I will be inviting you to my younger sister's traditional marriage that will take place in our home town by month-end. Endeavor to attend the occasion to reunite with our friends and loved ones.
Yours Sincerely,
innocent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5798816568 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50197219223 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698224852071 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6679353183 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890425504418 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373924173277 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284315648099 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456798393707 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011482288634 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.