You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
2. Explain why you must change your plans.
3. Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Akshay,
Hello!!! I hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I am very excited about our road trip to Goa and celebrating your birthday on the beach under the clear night sky full of stars. I have already packed my bags with required beach wears along with getting my car serviced ready for the trip.
As per our plan, instead of going from Alibaugh, Ratnagiri, Malvan and then Chiplun; I recommend going from Pune, Solapur, Kolhapur and then Chiplun. As the roads after Alibaugh are getting repaired, preparation for the coming monsoon, the traffic has surged a lot and will be hectic to drive. As no hotel reservations are made, we can take the alternate route.
To make this trip more exciting, I was thinking of carrying a tent and required portable cooking set up; instead of staying in rooms, we can experience staying on open grounds or lands. I have checked on the internet that many have shared their tenting experience on this Solapur-Kolhapur highway, we can follow the same thing if required to avoid surprising disaster.
Looking forward to hearing from you so that tenting arrangements can be made.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nder the clear night sky full of stars. I have already packed my bags with requir...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rged a lot and will be hectic to drive. As no hotel reservations are made, we can ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87939698492 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59758654761 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683417085427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7438201211 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167332301531 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071545552487 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736068126931 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875794974936 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649549788051 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.