Dear Friend,
I am writing this letter to inform you that we need to postpone our holiday plan of Italy due to COVID-19 pandemic.I have organized all our travel arrangements but as these is a crucial thing and we can not risk lives of ours and our family members.
I have planned and shortlisted all the attraction of Italy and booked our stay and travel tickets,but this is a Pandemic declared by WHO and a lot of people already died their. Maximum nations have declared a complete lockdown and passengers who were in the middle of their journey asked to go back to their home country. Government has declared full refund of travel tickets so we do not need to worry about that and I hope you can understand the situation now.
We will plan our holiday in near future when all this settle down and people will be back to their normal life. I have shortlisted some other destinations which we can think upon for our holiday plan.This time we will plan for a wildlife sanctuary or a road trip and i assure you that you will love it. I have already applied for refund and I will book our tickets for the next journey as soon as i will get the refund from travel company and hotel.
Thanks
XYZ
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...y and booked our stay and travel tickets,but this is a Pandemic declared by WHO and ...
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...we can think upon for our holiday plan.This time we will plan for a wildlife sanctu...
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...a wildlife sanctuary or a road trip and i assure you that you will love it. I hav...
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...tickets for the next journey as soon as i will get the refund from travel company...
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...from travel company and hotel. Thanks XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45248868778 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38734849855 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552036199095 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3339392506 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.571428571 76.5299724578 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 16.8248392259 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142863395083 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598215490456 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537437660992 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098189058721 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245369040251 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 8.37731958763 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.