You have a penfriend living in another country and he/she is curious to know about the major news items in your country .
Briefly describe ONE news story that has been on TV,on the radio, or in the newspapers in your country , and explain why people are interested in it.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Anand
I hope this letter of mine finds you in good health. I am inscribing this missive in response to your last letter that i have received yesterday in which you want to know about the latest update from my country.
In these days, the most controversial topoc in my native nation is 'kathua rape case', which is been telecasting on every newschannel, newspaper and magazine. It is hot topic of discussion everywhere. It is a case of a rape of 8 year old girl from the place called kathua in Jammu & Kashmir, in January. The masses are having keen interest in it, as firstly, its a matter of a small girl and everyone is now worried about the security of their own daughters. They are involved in the candle marches also. Secondly, the girl was from Muslim community and political people has given it a different phase for their own benefit and it has become most discussed issue all over the country.
I hope soon this news will be on the international newschannel as it is directly linked to every human being.
Best regards
Radhika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'girl' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'girls'.
Suggestion: girls
...e. It is a case of a rape of 8 year old girl from the place called kathua in Jammu &...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...having keen interest in it, as firstly, its a matter of a small girl and everyone i...
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Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...They are involved in the candle marches also. Secondly, the girl was from Muslim com...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5857137453 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0593192706 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0934799583408 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280218800203 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339106667236 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636601839921 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289408337078 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.