Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.
Discuss
Respect is the caring and positive attitude we feel for others and ourselves. With the advent of modernization and technology development, parents are complaining that, their children are becoming preoccupied and donot have to time to respect their elders also, which is directly or indirectly affecting the society. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons behind this behaviour.
Firstly, children in the past, used to respect their parents and grandparents , with love. But, today this is totally changed, now, parents want their offsprings to be self-dependent and they are ready to give their kids, whatever they want. However, youngsters specially teenagers, do not like interference in any matter from their parents. When kids watch some show on television or movies, they try to imitate the heroes and heroines, because, they become their ideal, and kids want to be like them. And in this, if their parents object, they see this as way of blocking their freedom. Thus they start disrespecting ad neglecting their parents.
Moreover, such behaviour from teenagers is actually creating differences within families, and is dangerous to society. Teenage is an age, when a person feels he or she is already grown up, and take his or her decision well, but, sometimes they take wrong step, and that brings harm not only to oneself but to family as well as, to the society. Further, sometimes just out of curiosity or to prove a point, youngsters indulge in activities, such as, in drug abuse or sexual crimes. So, it is the responsibility of the parents to understand the psychology off teenagers and keep an eye on the activities, what their children are involved in.
In crux, elders should set an example for their future generations, by showing respect to their former seniors. As commonly say 'As you sow, so shall you reep'.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04918032787 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76768639848 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616393442623 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9769244522 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367832004682 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112531786233 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795212321796 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189175388969 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102405960397 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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