Hi John,
This is Jane your neighbor, I am writing you to bring into your attention towards the litter and garbage in front of our lane.
Let me explain further, from past one month your maid has been constantly disposing the garbage from your house in our garbage bin kept outside our house.As you might be aware, each house should have a garbage bin which is absent from your house. Moreover, the waste overflows making our porch dirty and stinking.We have already requested her to stop this practice but she has turned a deaf ear towards this matter.
I would request you to discuss this issue with her and find a solution for this problem.Why don't we buy a bigger waste box which could be used by us both? I would be happy to contribute, it is definitely better than starting the morning seeing litter scattered all over and the Foul smell.
Hope you will take actions on this matter as soon as possible.
Your's Faithfully
Jane.
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...s soon as possible. Yours Faithfully Jane.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7005988024 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29449951601 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694610778443 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9666380539 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207745873302 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914952524415 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560224587371 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122457971422 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349092756706 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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