You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to companyComplaining about thisGiving your reasonsAsking for bill to be changed

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You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to lodge a complaint regarding the extra phone bill. I have been charged an extra amount of 6000 rupees in my total bill that too for an international calls in Toronto, where I have never called.
I am registered with your company from the last three years where i use this number for local calls and messages only. So, I am sure that definitely there was an error in bill sent to me from your side. Also, i have checked my call history online which is totally opposite to the bill sent to me.
I request you to please check into the matter immediately and do the needful so that I can pay my actual bill by the coming due date.
Thanking you for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Rupinder Singh

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...company from the last three years where i use this number for local calls and mes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 612.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46715328467 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41127937166 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678832116788 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0123335248 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369957714646 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150101245978 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707450191693 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213193836365 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844363540793 0.0580467560999 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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