Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Waqas Arif and I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with the items which I bought from your outlet last week.
One week ago, I visited your Garden branch to purchase a Philips adapter model no. 3vs and a Samsung laptop charger, and both products had one-year warranty, so I had to pay extra money to claim the warranty in case of fault.
However, when I reached home and took out the things, I unexpectedly discovered the flaws in my purchased items because the red main switch button on the adapter is broken, and it does not show yellow light while plugged in an electrical board, and the laptop charger takes five hours to charge the battery which is too long even though I was told by your salesman that it would not take more than two hours.
I am not delighted with your service. I would like to suggest a way to resolve this matter. You should exchange them for a new one, or your company will refund me the full sum.
I am hoping for your cooperation in this issue.
Yours sincerely,
WaqasArif
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Garden) must be used with a third-person verb: 'branches'.
Suggestion: branches
... One week ago, I visited your Garden branch to purchase a Philips adapter model no....
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r company will refund me the full sum. I am hoping for your cooperation in this...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.578125 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39229244681 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697916666667 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.682088487 44.8134815571 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149266703467 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571010094409 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037345871551 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737107650211 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508983189241 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.