Since the advent of computers, they have been playing a vital role in all the sectors around the globe, and their positive effects have been seen everywhere. In my opinion, I completely agree that their usage and benefits are plausible, and further improvements in this technology can make the world more prosperous than ever.
To begin with, people use computer systems virtually in every field such as operating planes, running trains, diagnosing diseases, and trading goods, but these are not limited in these arenas because in the western countries namely United States of America, Canada, Australia etc. have adopted computerized systems profoundly and take their advantages in every type of jobs.
In addition, business to business (B2B) websites are keys to expanding commercial relations beyond the national borders because these are the platforms where a global business community looks up for overseas suppliers and buyers to purchase and sell all kinds of products without travelling from one place to another due to having extensive internet access across the Earth.
Furthermore, distance learning has been contributing in the paramount role in spreading education in all parts of the world in the last two decades especially in the remote areas where schools, colleges and universities are not available because of harsh weather and climate instability, so in these places educators teach masses everything about academic subjects through networking.
To sum up, pros can be easily seen by public about the usage of computers because of their uncountable benefits at a professional level. Consequently, I think that computers enhance global economy across the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, look, so, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49425287356 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77197173638 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.372105806 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.25 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113942391196 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461775657875 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0175217315168 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553521079055 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225017829827 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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