You have recently come back from an overseas holiday. An employee at the airport helped you when you were in trouble.
Write a letter to the airport manager. In your letter
- Describe your problem
- How the employee helped you
- Tell the manager to give a reward to that employee.
Dear Sir,
Last week, I came back from a vacation in England. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to Mr David Hobson, an employee at your Heathrow airport terminal 2, for helping me in finding my Cabin luggage.
I checked in at Terminal 1 and took the airport metro to go to Terminal 2, as my flight was departing from there. However, upon reaching there I realized that I forgot my bag in the metro. To add to it, only 26 minutes were left for the flight to depart.
I immediately contacted the airport help desk and explained my problem. They assigned Mr David to help me out. He immediately called the metro and got the bag located. However, there was no time left to get the bag to me. He assured me that he will arrange to send the bag in the next flight and requested me to board the flight.
As promised by him, the bag was delivered to me the next day. This incident had made me think that would it not be inspiring for the airport staff to be rewarded for such good work by the management. I request you to reciprocate his good behaviour with some kind of reward so that he keeps serving the travellers better
Yours faithfully,
Neil Nitin Mukesh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34946236559 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38816816991 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0008068756 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2307692308 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138336270014 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465608482692 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584257249066 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830301770506 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740203007872 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.