Your company sent you to USA for further training. You stayed for the decided time but you want to stay there for more time.
Write a letter to the company manager.
In your letter
- What you have done during the training period.
- What benefits you have received from training
- Why you want to overstay there.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that my training on Enterprise Financials would be completed next week. However, I intend to stay for an additional week here to get the certification cleared.
The training was comprehensive and it covered al the modules ranging from Accounts Payables to General Ledger. The trainer was also well versed on the topic and gave us real-world examples which helped us in understanding the concepts with ease. The best part about the training was that we are giving ample time for the hands-on session which gave us more clarity and confidence on the subject matter.
However, I was informed that the certifications exams dates have been postponed for the next week. Since I have to fly back to India this week as per the original plan, I will not be able to sit for the exams. Hence, I am requesting you to extend my stay here in the USA for an additional week.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Govind
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n understanding the concepts with ease. The best part about the training was that w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79532163743 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66447278175 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7738313815 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247583776344 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946873755662 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593070246884 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146405218358 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540151638125 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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