You have recently come back from an overseas holiday. You faced some problems with the hotel booked through your travel agent.
Write a letter to your travel agent. In the letter
details about the hotel booking
problems that you faced
give suggestions to the travel agent so that such problems are not repeated.
Dear Sir,
My name is Nilesh Pandey. I just arrived back home from the European Holiday which was booked through your travel agency. I must say that the travel was mostly satisfying and I had a good time. However, I want to bring to your notice that I was not happy with the hotel accommodation.
Even though, I had specifically asked for a hotel, which was near the city centre, to allow us ample time for shopping in the evening. However, the hotel where we stayed was 10 miles away from the city centre. Another point is that the rooms booked were of executive class rather than Super Deluxe class which was promised to us. Because of this, most of the facilities which we were expecting in the rooms were not available and So, we had to pay an additional charge to avail it.
I would suggest for avoiding such scenarios in the future would be to consult the tourists before making the final booking with the Hotels.
Yours Faithfully,
Nilesh J Pandey
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...avel agency. I must say that the travel was mostly satisfying and I had a good time. However, I want ...
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Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest avoiding'.
Suggestion: suggest avoiding
...ditional charge to avail it. I would suggest to avoid such scenarios in the future would be t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61849710983 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32500754023 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8793004052 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160737851993 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682744456826 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063414341423 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10664780877 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740158265924 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.